Welcome back to The Second Draft, I am Farida Haque. Today I have a report in front of me. Fourteen pages. A listener sent it with permission and asked why her director never acted on it. I read it twice before I found the answer: the only recommendation in the whole document is in the last paragraph on page fourteen. Her director never got there. To fix it I have brought in someone who writes for the most impatient readers alive. Arif Chowdhury wrote speeches for two ministers, and he has very strong views on where the point goes. Together we are going to take this report apart and rebuild it so a busy person understands it in one minute. The before and after are on the show page. You are listening on Witspeak Podcasts.